Thoughtful Thursday – Mass Transit Mania

trainThis morning was one of those rough kinds of days. NJ Transit train sat on the tracks into New York. Metrocard machine for the subway wasn’t taking credit cards. Subway wasn’t running, making me walk up several flights to a different subway line.

Total time to office: 2 hours.

Having said that, I can’t imagine any other way to get to work other than mass transit, especially in a place like New York. The ride is usually good and uneventful. I’m being environmentally friendly, which hopefully makes up for chopping down the Christmas tree each year. I have a seat on the train and write until we reach NYC, pumping out several pages if I’m lucky.

Normally I would walk to work, being economically friendly to myself, but it was 8 degrees this morning. Subway weather.

This morning just happened to be the perfect storm of lousy weather, delays and off line machines.

Do you commute to work? Is it a long one, short one? Do you like it?

My thoughts for this Thursday. Wishing you all a good day!

Wicked Wednesday – Crazy for the Cat

MOON FEVER - USA Today and NY Times BestsellerOh the weather outside is frightful . . .

A couple of inches of snow here in the NY/NJ area plus lots of slick spots. Weatherman was saying that this time last year we’d had 3 inches, but this year we are already up to 19 inches!

Of course that has me yearning for spring and warmer weather. Since you might be feeling the same way as well, I thought I’d take you somewhere tropical today — the Amazon jungle where the weather is always hot and humid. I hope you enjoy this Wicked Wednesday excerpt from CRAZY FOR THE CAT which was my contribtuion to the USA Today and NY Times bestseller – MOON FEVER.


Prologue

The stillness of death replaced the noises of the night.

Gone were the chirps of the tree frogs and chatter of the small monkeys in the nearby jungle. Even the low slap of the water against the dock near the river seemed more muted.

Victor Chavez picked his head up from the field notebook where he had been writing intently, describing the plant the tribal shaman had showed him a few days before. Carefully packed inside his duffle were a number of slides and specimens from the unusual vegetation. Materials which he and his colleague, Jessica Morales, would test when he returned to New Jersey.

New Jersey the Garden State, but the night in Jersey’s farmlands was never as quiet as it was here in the Amazon rainforest only. . .

It was too quiet, he thought again.

He rose from the hand-hewn desk and crept to the square hole cut into the wooden wall which served as a window. He pulled aside the light canvas shade which had been closing it off.

As he stood at the opening, he wondered what it was that had created such a dearth of noise in the rainforest outside. Peering through the crude window, he thought he saw something shifting through the underbrush close to the edge of the village.

A man? he wondered, searching the shadows where he again caught a glimpse of a shape — definitely something human. Dark and large. For a moment the silhouette seemed familiar, but only for a moment as the underbrush stirred again and instead of a man, a large black jaguar came into view.

For days he had felt the presence of the cat. Had thought that he had seen the animal stalking him on several occasions. Now here it was, right out in the open, seemingly without a fear.

The black jaguar was magnificent, one of the biggest specimens he had ever seen. Moonlight bathed the animal as it moved farther out from the jungle. Beneath the glistening midnight black of its fur, he could barely make out the distinctive darker rosette patterns of a regular jaguar.

The black cat’s thick muscles bunched, elegant and lethal as it moved, but not away from the huts as he expected. It stalked closer and closer into the village as if with a purpose.

Cold fear seized him when he made eye contact with the animal. An eerily human gaze locked with his and in that second, he knew the cat was coming for him.

He rushed back to the center of the hut, searching wildly for anything he could use as a weapon. He was a scientist and not a hunter. Ill-equipped to fend off an animal like the black jaguar, he thought as he grabbed the chair from his desk, thinking he could use it to keep the animal at bay until help came.

As the animal flew through the crude window opening and landed before him, Victor screamed. Repeatedly called out for help as he jabbed at the black cat, but with one swipe of its massive paw, the cat ripped the chair from his hands.

The black jaguar lunged at him, landing solidly on his chest and knocking him to the ground.

Pain seared through his shoulder and neck as the animal bit deep, sharp fangs easily piercing skin and muscle. His screams turned to a sickening gurgle and hiss leaking from his ravaged throat.

The cat wasn’t done, however.

With a shake of its immense head, the jaguar jerked him back and forth, as if playing with him and maybe it was.

It tossed him aside, sauntered away from him and roared with seeming delight even as the cries of the villagers warned they were on their way.

Eyesight fading as his life bled from him, Victor met the cat’s knowing gaze. Saw the glee there. Human glee and satisfaction. A rumble came from the black jaguar’s mouth, almost like laughter.

The animal approached him again, its breath hot against his face. Midnight black fur soft as it brushed his cheek a second before the cat took his head into its large mouth.

Victor screamed again, the sound echoing only in his brain as the black jaguar delivered its killing bite, crushing his skull as if it were a paper mache piñata.

Plotting Your Novel

Starting to write a novelBefore I sold my first few books, I never had either a synopsis or outline of the story I would write. I would just get started and bam —

Of course, my first book was an unwieldly 1200 pages and needed to be broken into three stories for it to be marketable. I managed to break out the first story, but never sold it. One day I may dust it off and see what to do about it.

Since then, I’ve learned the necessity of having at least the basic elements of the story in my head before I sit down to write the dreaded synopsis. (I so hate writing the synopsis!)

So, before I write, I consider the following three points in the overall story arc:

    1. The ordinary world of both the hero and heroine and what their role is in that ordinary world.
    2. The ending, namely, what I want both the hero and heroine to have learned and accepted about themselves when the story ends.
    3. How I will make them confront their internal conflict at the height of the story (the black moment as it were).

For example, in HONOR CALLS, I knew that the heroine, Michaela, was a loner in her ordinary world and devoted to a cause – hunting the vampire that raped and killed her mother. The hero, Jesus, was also a loner with a devotion to his own cause — the FBI and upholding the law.

What ending did a want? Well in a romance it has to be a happy ending so I knew I had to get them together somehow and they had to have learned something about themselves. In this case that they didn’t necessarily have to be alone for the moment. (I say this because I would really really like to continue this story in a full length novel.)

As for their internal conflict at the height of the story — sorry, I’m going to tease you and say you’ll need to read the story to find out.

With those three basic plot points you can then write the scenes to start your story, know what you have to do to reach the black moment and where you will go once you overcome that obstacle.

For those aspiring writers out there, I hope that this helped! Also, if you’ve got a project and need a jump start to get it going, check out the Liberty States Fiction Writers Mayke It Happen Challenge. (No, that’s not a typo!). The Mayke It Happen Challenge ends in May, hence the MAY in MAYKE.

If you reach your goal by May 31, you will be eligible for a drawing for a critique. Three people will be chosen and either an editor, agent or published author will offer a critique of your work. From now until May 31, you will be on an e-mail loop sharing your progress, asking questions and being mentored by four published authors! The four published authors are:

    Debra Mullins
    Linda Parisi
    Caridad Pineiro
    Lois Winston

For more information on the challenge, you can click here!

HONOR CALLS by Caridad Pineiro February 2009On another note, HONOR CALLS is now available at Eharlequin.com! For more on this novel, you can click here.

Guilty Pleasures Monday – Jensen Ackles

This morning’s Guilty Pleasure is Supernatural Hottie Jensen Ackles. I know Jensen used to be on another show, but I became familiar with him from Supernatural which I love. A really creepy and scary paranormal television series on the CW.

Supernatural also features another cutie, Jared Padelecki who used to play Dean on The Gilmore Girls.

If you haven’t caught Supernatural and love horror/paranormal, give it a short. It’s really good.

Jensen is also, starring in MY BLOODY VALENTINE 3D! Hope you enjoyed this Monday’s Guilty Pleasure.

HONOR CALLS by Caridad Pineiro February 2009On another note, HONOR CALLS is now available at Eharlequin.com! For more on this novel, you can click here.

Fun Friday – Sibling Rivalries and Double-Stuffed!

I saw ads for the Sibling Rivalry – the Mannings against the Williams – on the way to work and had to find out what it was about! So, what was it? Visit dsrl.com, the home of the Double Stuffed Racing League. LOL! You can watch more DSRL videos and make a Yooble. Check out my Yooble by clicking on this link.

Here’s one of the commercials for the DSRL which might give you a chuckle on this Fun Friday!

snoopylilLast but not least, doing the woo hoo dance here!

I wanted to share with you the first review for FURY CALLS which got 4.5 stars from Romantic Times! Wooo Hooo!

FURY CALLS (4.5) by Caridad Pineiro: When a vampire couple kills each other at the restaurant where she cooks, vampire chef Meghan Thomas teams up with Blake Richards — the man she hates for creating her undead life — to find out what made the pair kill each other in bloodlust. Determined to turn Meghan’s hatred of him into love, Blake gets a job at the restaurant and resolves to be a better person (vampire). But his resolve is tested when Meghan questions his loyalty. Piñeiro infuses her vampires with very human feelings, making her paranormal story seem realistic. It’s a great read!
—Alexandra Kay

Thank Alexandra and RT! You rock!

Hope you all have a wonderful weekend.

Thoughtful Thursday – Dying and Paying Taxes

taxesI think you know that old saying that goes: There are only two things you have to do – die and pay taxes.

Unfortunately, it seems that the paying taxes part only applies to you and me while some people are able to make “careless mistakes”.

Case in point — Our new Secretary of the Treasury Timothy Geithner who said he hadn’t paid some taxes on time due to “careless mistakes.” According to an article in The Guardian, after a 2006 audit Geithner paid arrears on his 2003 and 2004 returns, but not immediately on his 2001 and 2002 returns. Apparently the three year statute of limitations had run on those. He did eventually pay them — after his nomination to the post.

Hmm . . . Does that mean that if he hadn’t been nominated he wouldn’t have paid them? What do you think?

I recall the IRS sending letters to my daughter when a math error meant she owed them like 5 dollars. The letter came with all kinds of dire warnings about what would be done if the 5 dollars and interest wasn’t paid on time.

So how is it some people get away with not paying thousands? Do you wonder how this happens?

Let me know what you think about the U.S. tax system or your own tax situation if you are not in the U.S. I know that many of you in other countries pay even higher taxes.

Wicked Wednesday – HONOR CALLS Available February 1

HONOR CALLS Available February 1 at EharlequinI’m really excited about HONOR CALLS, the next installment in THE CALLING Vampire novels. HONOR CALLS is a Nocturne Bite e-novella which will be available on February 1 at eharlequin. It’s exciting for me because I get to introduce a new character into the world of THE CALLING – Michaela Ramirez. Michaela has a tortured past and is a really unique character. She’s hiding a secret and bound by a code of honor which will one day put her at odds with the very interesting man that Michaela will meet in HONOR CALLS.

Who’s that interesting man? FBI Assistant Director in Charge Jesus Hernandez who you have met in several of the previous CALLING novels. It’s also exciting for me to let you learn more about Jesus. I am hoping that I will be able to devote a future full length book to Michaela and Jesus.

But for now . . . Here is your Wicked Wednesday excerpt from HONOR CALLS.

Frustration clawed at his gut as he stared at the picture of the latest victim who had been found torn apart in a downtown alley. As he flipped through the status report on the investigation, a familiar name appeared in the FBI case report.

The Blood Bank.

FBI Assistant Director in Charge Jesus Hernandez expected that there would be a fair share of crime in a city like New York, but judging from how often the edgy Goth bar appeared in the reports provided to him, the Blood Bank appeared to be Crime Central.

He supposed the easy way to find out more about the club would be to ask Diana Reyes or any of the other agents in his bureau what to make of the place. But he hadn’t gotten to be one of the top agents in the New York City Bureau by taking the easy way. On the contrary. He believed in personally getting involved when it was necessary.

As he picked up the file again and examined the photo of the body parts found in an alley just a couple of blocks from the bar, he raked his hand through his short-cropped hair and blew out a disgusted breath.

It was definitely time for a visit to the Blood Bank to get his own impressions.

Memorizing the address, he rose from his desk and slipped on his suit jacket. For a moment he considered going by his apartment to change, certain he would look out of place in the expensive suit, then opted not to.

His apartment would be seriously empty since his last lover had moved out nearly a year earlier, complaining about the time he devoted to his job. Considering that in the past year he hadn’t had time to fill the empty spaces on the walls and that the living room still boasted only the recliner she had left behind, plasma television and other high end electronics, she had probably been right.

Plus, as he mentally reviewed the contents of his closet, he knew he had nothing suitable to wear for a Goth bar anyway.

Best just to drive by, scope out the place and decide what to do next, he told himself and for good measure, checked to make sure his gun was loaded and tucked snugly into the holster at his side.

That was the one thing he was sure about the Blood Bank.

It wasn’t the kind of place you went without protection.